For Olympics we had to chose a sport that we wanted to compete in and then we had to find all of the rules. I learnt some of the rules and some fun facts. Next time I am going to find some more facts.
Kia Ora Leah. I really liked you post and facts. I really learnt a lot about swimming. How long did it take to find the facts about swimming? This reminds me of Grey Main School Olympics. Poroporoaki (bye).
Kia Ora, Leah I like how you have put lot´s of detail into this piece of work. I also like how you have put fun facts. I remember this when I do swimming lessons. Next time you could check your spelling because before is not correct its like befor and that is not good so check your spelling. Do you do swimming lessons?
Hello Leah. I really like the rainbow colours you have chosen. Perhaps you could use a slightly larger font so that it is easier to read and it fills the space better!
Kia Ora Leah. I really like how you have put colourful letters. But Next time you should put full stops in. How long can you stay under water? Heoi ano taku mo naianei.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora your swimming reflection is really good. Next time you could try to put more headings like the fun facts one.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Leah. I really liked you post and facts. I really learnt a lot about swimming. How long did it take to find the facts about swimming? This reminds me of Grey Main School Olympics. Poroporoaki (bye).
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Leah I like how you have put lot´s of detail into this piece of work. I also like how you have put fun facts. I remember this when I do swimming lessons. Next time you could check your spelling because before is not correct its like befor and that is not good so check your spelling. Do you do swimming lessons?
ReplyDeleteHello Leah. I really like the rainbow colours you have chosen. Perhaps you could use a slightly larger font so that it is easier to read and it fills the space better!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Leah. I really like how you have put colourful letters. But Next time you should put full stops in. How long can you stay under water?
ReplyDeleteHeoi ano taku mo naianei.
Kia Ora Madi I can hold my breth for 38 seconds
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